after sketching out the remaining pages, going back to try an tighten the first page up. Attempting to bring in some vibrancy without getting heavy handed and losing the
sketchy vibe. Not quite there yet....
some current work in progress. lots of pages due in short time, so it's been good for trying to find a faster, looser way to go. Here, it's going directly from a sketchy version to color, skipping the "tightening" phase a little--though it's still reworked from initial sketch.
here's the original sketch, tighter sketch w/tones, coloring in progress